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27 December 2011 @ 02:54 am
It's Very Expensive - HoMin - 1  


Title: It's Very Expensive
Pairing(s): HoMin - seme!Yunho x uke!Changmin
Genre: AU, Comedy, Romance
Rating: PG14 - R (-ish)
Summary: Where Yunho thought Changmin was a prostitute - and the other didn't deny it (bad choice). Then sees each other 3 years later, and all Changmin wants to do is hide from Yunho.




GIFs by Vanitysixx @ Tumblr





<- 3 Years Ago ->



Maybe it was the fur collared coat. Maybe it was the low neckline - I thought I felt a chill. May it was the skinny jeans - I knew they were too tight when I bought them. Maybe I shouldn't have crossed my legs like that. Maybe I shouldn't have looked his direction, or smiled back when he looked at me.

Then he wouldn't have walked up to me. Then he wouldn't have thought I was something I wasn't.

"How much is it?" He smiled.

I looked at him looking at me. I felt the fur on my collar tickling my neck and the first thing I thought of was my coat so I answered him. "It's very expensive."

He nodded and let out a low chuckle. He leaned into me. I felt his warm breath on my ear. "Meet me up in room 502."

Then he walked away but not before I felt his fingers brushed mine as he passed.

So he wasn't admiring my coat.

Maybe I had a little too much to drink that night. And maybe he's just a bit too handsome. But I found myself in the middle of the hotel's corridor in front of a door with the gold number plate engraved '502'.

I knocked three times before the door clicked open slightly. I pushed the rest of my way in. I saw no one. Then heard the door shut behind me. I stiffen but soon these arms wrapped around me from behind.

"You're here." It was his voice. His arms holding me. His lips on the tip if my earlobe, and his warm breath again.

"Are you ready?" His words brought shivers down my spine.

"Let me shower first." What was I saying?

He loosen his hold for me to slip out of his arms. "Sure." A grin light up his face.

As the hot water hit my skin I hoped that he had left already - like I should have. Why hadn't I?

Or maybe he had already undressed and waiting for me naked under the bed sheets. I wondered how he looked like without clothes on - even without them I could see his lean muscles. I mentally slapped myself.

Why was I putting myself through this? He thought I was one of those people who'd sell themselves for a little cash. It's not like I need it, but I could use some. And I hadn't gotten any action in a couple months - or a year.

Ugh! This was so messed up.

He was sitting quietly at the edge of the bed when I came out of the shower. As I brushed my fingers through my tangled wet hair he was looking at the time on his cellphone, and testing out some ringtones - I hate it when people do that in public, but we were in a hotel room, weren't we? And he didn't even seem to notice me. It annoyed me, which led me to do something I didn't know I would ever do to get someone's attention.

Wearing only a bathrobe, I flipped my hair to one side and started drying it with a towel in front of him. As I hoped he looked up at me and put his cellphone away. We made eye contact, and he smiled at me. I bite my lip, wishing he'd stop doing that.

But then he said this. "Sorry. I think I made a mistake. I can't do this after all." He stood up.

He led me all the way up here and he was about to leave? Well, I don't know what took over me but I pushed him down on the bed. I tossed the towel to a vacant spot on the floor and closed in on him. Sliding a knee between his legs, a nice bit of my thigh exposed - and I left my underwear in the bathroom.

The bed creaked softly and I said to him - in what I hoped was a sexy voice, "You're not leaving me alone tonight." I trickled my fingertips down his neck as I kissed the skin.

I finally heard him moan when I got to his collarbone. That was almost too easy. I thought there was going to be a fight for the lead, but I guess he was one of those submissive ones. But then, once my hand had reached under his shirt he grabs it with a tight grip.

"Wait, what are you doing?!” he exclaimed with a pink face. He looked really serious and... tempting?

Slanted cat-like eyes. Ideal nose. Plumped bottom lip with the tiniest mole atop his upper lip - I've never seen a guy with a mole there before, interesting. And a perfect jaw line. Yes, quite tempting.

"The name's Changmin. And what do you think I'm going to do to you?" I said grinning at him. Damn, why was I like this all a sudden. "I'm taking you tonight." I sounded like such a perv. I'll just blame it on the alcohol.

I grabbed his chin and laid a hard smack on his lips, then pushed him down on the bed and processed to what I said I was going to do to him. But then the tables got turned.. fast. He wrapped his arms around my neck and his legs around my waist and rolled us over.

I was beneath him. He straddled my hips and held my wrists down above my head. And the look in his was kind of dangerous. Made me a bit hot and bothered. So I closed my eyes and let him take the lead. And it didn't help that my heart was beating fast and his hands were moving slow - painfully slow.

It took a while to get things right on my part, but once it did I never thought I could scream like that - or moan that way. "No" and "Don't" left my lips many of times. Shit, I must had sounded like a frickin' Japanese AV star. But as things moved faster all I heard was me screaming for more more more of him. While he called my name over and over again.

The next morning I found only myself in the hotel bed with a note and money attached to it on the pillow next to me. It read:

Changmin,

Thank you for last night.
Hope I left enough.

Yunho

P.S. I already paid for the room.



I realized I hadn't asked him for his name the night before because of all the... action. And I felt cheap... very.

There was a bad feeling in my stomach that ran up my throat. I ran to the toilet but nothing came out. Then I took a long hot shower. An hour scrubbing until my skin felt raw, but still I didn't feel cleaned.

I never saw that Yunho person again since that night. Why would I? I never even went back to that hotel. In my mind it never happened. It was like a dream - quoting the popular phrase because it felt fitting.







<- Present ->



"Sir, sir? Can I take your order? Sir, are you okay?" the waitress asks, while I'm desperately trying to make myself disappear behind this menu I'm holding to my face, because three tables away I see him again - after two, no three years, and he's still... too handsome.

"Stop it." I slap the waitress' hand away for attempting to pull the menu out of my hands.

"Sir, do I have to ask you to leave?"

Oh, no he just turned this way.

Yunho?





Afterwords: If you like it please leave comments. Otherwise I guess this storyline sucks, so I should just stop writing. OMG, what was I thinking!? *sighs*



 
 
 
Sitty1232sitty1232 on December 27th, 2011 01:37 pm (UTC)
this is really interesting! please do continue.
tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:05 am (UTC)
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shunluvshunluv on December 27th, 2011 01:48 pm (UTC)
i love this already<3
poor Min at the end^^;

i really hope you would continue this story^^
really want them to clear the misunderstanding..
tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:06 am (UTC)
I just wonder how Min's going to do it.

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scarsluvscarsluv on December 27th, 2011 01:59 pm (UTC)
I love it! Can't wait for the awkward meeting between the two♥ you should continue it ;)

And lol the gif is really fitting XD
tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:07 am (UTC)
The GIF was so cute I had to write a story about it.

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gunduzdusugunduzdusu on December 27th, 2011 02:14 pm (UTC)
Oh no! You cannot stop writing *shows you puppy eyes* the plot is intriguing, in fact so very much intriguing!! You cannot leave me desperate and pathetic in need of more HoMin of this verse...

<"How much is it?" He smiled.

I looked at him looking at me. I felt the fur on my collar tickling my neck and the first thing I thought of was my coat so I answered him. "It's very expensive."

He nodded and let out a low chuckle. He leaned into me. I felt his warm breath on my ear. "Meet me up in room 502."

Then he walked away but not before I felt his fingers brushed mine as he passed.

So he wasn't admiring my coat.>

That part seriously got me laugh so hard that it gave me a stomach ache :P Seriously, Min, is it really very expensive ? :P I wish I could afford you, ehm, I mean the coat :P

Please go on writing this story!! I hope you update soon!

Thnx so much for sharing :) Cannot wait for the next part :)
tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:10 am (UTC)
*sighs* sometimes Minnie can be so clueless - about it sexiness XD

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mun_hmun_h on December 27th, 2011 02:20 pm (UTC)
continue plisss... awesome storyline and i like it♥
tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:10 am (UTC)
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tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:15 am (UTC)
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vid_chanvid_chan on December 27th, 2011 03:11 pm (UTC)
please please please do continue~~
i like it..no..i love it!!!
i love your writing style and i love your storyline..please update soon!!
tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:16 am (UTC)
I'm glad you like the style.
But I'm still trying to capture the spirit of Changmin in the story.

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trish3815trish3815 on December 27th, 2011 04:04 pm (UTC)
Oh, please continue with the story... it has my attention..
tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:17 am (UTC)
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GinMinchangminlv on December 27th, 2011 04:41 pm (UTC)
<3 do continue pleaseeee i love it already, funny <3
tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:17 am (UTC)
glad you enjoy it!

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snow_meowsnow_meow on December 27th, 2011 04:59 pm (UTC)
Interesting.
I wonder what made Yunho pick Changmin and what made him wants to back out halfway.

I cannot wait to read more.
tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:19 am (UTC)
I'm trying to figure that part out too.
Now what can be so allurring about Changmin, hmmm...

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Lolistarlolistar73 on December 27th, 2011 06:06 pm (UTC)
Awesome plot idea! You have me hooked ^__^ I hope there is more coming our way :D ukeMin chaptered stories are becoming a scarcity! lol
tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:21 am (UTC)
I get what you mean.

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tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:21 am (UTC)
YAY!

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Saving Gaiamsamplified11 on December 27th, 2011 08:57 pm (UTC)
I wanna see how the meet up in the present turns out. Plus Chami's gotta clear the air about him being a erm.. yeah. Hehe. Please do continue the story and happy new year in advance, have a gr8 2012 I hope! =D
tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:22 am (UTC)
happy new year!!!

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cleomooncleomoon on December 27th, 2011 10:51 pm (UTC)
Please update, I'm eager to know what will happen!
tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:22 am (UTC)
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aamuzz on December 28th, 2011 05:12 am (UTC)
I can't wait to see what Changmin will do next. The storyline is getting interesting. Update soon please. Thanks.
tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:23 am (UTC)
Hope you like what comes next...

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jhyjfanjhyjfan on December 28th, 2011 08:20 am (UTC)
interesting...pls continue updating this : )
tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:29 am (UTC)
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chocolet89: hominchocolet89 on December 28th, 2011 08:55 am (UTC)
;AAA; please tell me you'll continue this alskdjfslkf you can't leave them like that ;3;
I wanna see Yunho's reaction when he finds out Changmin isn't a prostitute hehehe XD and I wonder what Changmin's original err job is ^^
tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:31 am (UTC)
their occupations shall be revealed...

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ALYA JUNHO ♥♥ LEEheartbeatclouds on December 28th, 2011 01:28 pm (UTC)
This storyline is so awesome and please don't stop writing this!!
It is really interesting and I can't wait for their meeting in the next update :D
tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:31 am (UTC)
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momoirokuromomoirokuro on December 28th, 2011 03:19 pm (UTC)
please do continue this~
i'm begging you ^^
제발~~

tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:32 am (UTC)
aww no need to beg ^^;

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shinchul303shinchul303 on December 29th, 2011 01:47 pm (UTC)
Are you crazy? This is REALLY good! Your writing style is different--and very intriguing.

Hwaiting.

tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:33 am (UTC)
I'm happy you like the style.

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sleepyhead/acebunbuns/chanseul/akitamagoo on December 29th, 2011 02:37 pm (UTC)
more pleaseee~~ :D
tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:34 am (UTC)
then there shall be...

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neuromancer: DBSK - HoMin01n3uromanc3r on December 29th, 2011 02:43 pm (UTC)
Nono, please continue, it was very amusing!

I can't wait to know what happens next! [heart]
tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:34 am (UTC)
I like the heart~

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brownboxbrownbox72 on December 29th, 2011 11:22 pm (UTC)
Are you seriously doubting the awesomeness of this fics plot?
We like it ^_^ please do continue~
Good luck!
tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:35 am (UTC)
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leia_in_pajamasleia_in_pajamas on December 30th, 2011 01:26 am (UTC)
Ehhhhhhhhhhh~~~
I'm going crazy not knowing what happens next oh my farking god <3
This is SO.GOOD. How awesome is the gif? And just the whole story?!

I don't know what else to say here, I'm just meant to show my appreciation and support for this.
YOU'RE AMAZING!
LOVE THIS STORY!
THANKS FOR WRITING!
tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:37 am (UTC)
YAY! I'm happy!!!

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kay_dallekay_dalle on December 30th, 2011 05:41 am (UTC)
"and he's still... too handsome."
xDDD

I want to know what happens next!
tokidokikotokidokiko on January 5th, 2012 04:38 am (UTC)
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